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critique my photography
here's a shot I took of my cousin's Charger...nothing spectacular about the car itself, but I'm interested in people's opinions of this shot. I have other shots, but this was the only good one of the bunch...probably b/c I started to get irritated b/c it was hot as s**t in the garage.
this is my type of shot.
i would have liked to see the entire tire, though.
i think the green sign on the right should be cropped/cloned out.
other than that, it's a very nice shot.
i would have liked to see the entire tire, though.
i think the green sign on the right should be cropped/cloned out.
other than that, it's a very nice shot.
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^^^
LOL...that's the best SN I've seen...
I did some photoshop editing, but nothing intensive. Just a quick-fix on contrast, hue and sharpness.
I agree...the whole tire would've been nice. The way the bottom is cut off is a bit distracting.
LOL...that's the best SN I've seen...
I did some photoshop editing, but nothing intensive. Just a quick-fix on contrast, hue and sharpness.
I agree...the whole tire would've been nice. The way the bottom is cut off is a bit distracting.
Originally Posted by abcdefGGGGGG
looks awesome. i think some post-processing with photoshop will really make it stand out more.
Exposure: 1.6 sec (8/5)
Aperture: f/4.5
Focal Length: 80 mm
ISO Speed: 200
Exposure Bias: 0/6 EV
Orientation: Horizontal (normal)
Software: Adobe Photoshop Elements 5.0 (20060914.r.77) Windows
Exposure Program: Manual
Compressed Bits per Pixel: 2 bits
Maximum Lens Aperture: 42/10
Metering Mode: Pattern
Light Source: Cool white fluorescent (W 3900 - 4500K)
Sub-Second Time (Digitized): 50
Color Space: sRGB
Sensing Method: One-chip colour area sensor
CFA Pattern: GREEN BLUE RED GREEN
Exposure Mode: Manual
White Balance: Manual
Focal Length In 35mm Film: 120
Contrast: Hard
Saturation: High saturation
Sharpness: Hard
Compression: JPEG
Image Width: 2896 pixels
Image Height: 1944 pixels
next time...shoot in raw, edit in raw, and save your pics at a .png file (no compression)
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That picture has tons of potential John. It would have been nice to have a lens that had a few more stops down, like my 17-50 2.8 so you dont have to have the shutter open for so long (more chance of camera shake) but nonetheless, really good picture for you.
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Thanks a lot...sometimes I feel that I'm improving, other times, not so much...then again, i've only been using an SLR for about 2-3 months or so. I do plan on getting a lens with a wider aperture...but i'm saving the money for other things at this time (built turbo, lol).
Luckily, i'm using the 55-200 Nikkor VR lens.
Luckily, i'm using the 55-200 Nikkor VR lens.
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Originally Posted by usingthejohn
yeah, i could only imagine the difference...just gotta check my mail eagerly for the program to arrive.
Do you shoot in RAW?
Do you shoot in RAW?
the only downside would be that you need a BIG CF card because raw files are so big. I just got a 4GB SanDisk ExtremeIII CF card and i can get 400 pictures in raw, over 1000 in highest quality jpeg.
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