my best photos...please tell me what you think
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Originally Posted by aszatk01
hey guys, been here for a while now and want some feedback on my photos. here are a few of my best. been into photography for a few months now and starting to get into it, as well as some minor photoshop cs2 work.
please tell me what you think of these shots-especially you photography buffs and even you photoshop gurus.
still an amateur at best so feel free to rip into me as i'm trying to get better at photography.
thank
ps:
the first shot was a still, where all the motion was created with blur in photoshop.
the second was some enhancement of the sky and desaturation of the rest
the third was some minor color enhancement and erasing of some objects in the background
please tell me what you think of these shots-especially you photography buffs and even you photoshop gurus.
still an amateur at best so feel free to rip into me as i'm trying to get better at photography.
thank
ps:
the first shot was a still, where all the motion was created with blur in photoshop.
the second was some enhancement of the sky and desaturation of the rest
the third was some minor color enhancement and erasing of some objects in the background
First the pics are WAY TOO SMALL!
1. looks pretty good, seems the greens are oversaturated though, also I would crop out the top 1/4 or so of that pic
2. I think you can get a better shot using that idea, the backgound(bridge and ground) kinda melts in with the rear of the G, I would like to see nice red lights and blue sky and sharp shiny silver trunk.
3. thats a cool shot, I like the low depth of field, but again I would chop off about 1/4 off the bottom, the backgrount isnt really working too well neither, the light post is coming out of the windshield, it would of been nicer if it was maybe on the right of the car and the bulding behind and to the left. Try this idea again and think more about overall composition.
4. I like these kind of shots (I call them MTV shots) but it isnt really working for me here, maybe if you had the whole car, or at least the rest of the head light, try not to cut things too much. Some will say stay away from these kind of angles as they are hard to get right.
5. DOF almost worked out here, the trunk should be sharper, the backgound works nice here though.
6. best of the pics, pretty nice composition and colors here, but, is the car the main subject of the pic or that metal thing? I like the idea.
You definatelly have some good ideas here, creative angles and compositions. Hope I didnt discourage you too much, I just tried to critique you based on what I thought. Keep practicing and experimenting, nothing you do in creative work is realy wrong and even tough most of your pictures wont come out great you will learn a lot.
keep on shooting.
